A big congratulations to Adam and Catherine in Ospreys who have been shortlisted by Pelham and entered to represent our school in the upper key stage two category of the Wimbledon BookFest Young Writers Competition.
I know that Ms. Ruthven had a really tough time choosing the shortlist from all the entrants, so well-done for making the cut. As we know, this year’s theme is The Secret and you can read Catherine’s short story and Adam’s poem by clicking on the links below:
Mysterious Things by Catherine
What features of narrative writing has Catherine used in her story?
What poetic features has Adam used in his poem?
As always, your feedback on the writing is highly encouraged.
P.S. Five housepoints to unicorns and dragons for the excellent effort that you both have put into this high quality and original writing. Well-done guys! 🙂
I have read these and can see why they got voted.
Thanks Yeseo.
Well done Catherine and Adam!!!!!!!!!
I agree with Yeseo they are really high quality. Well done Adam and Cathrine.
I read theme both and they gave me the chills. Both must of taken so much time and patience . They should be very proud of themselves. It was amazing!!
Thanks everyone!
I tried using short sentences after long ones to create tension.
Well done Catherine and Adam.I also see why you two got voted.
They are both amazing. Is there going to be a second part or are you going to leave us in suspense?