Thank you to Catherine for sending in the most recent paragraphs that you have written in your alternative version of Skellig. 
If possible, could you type up your writing if you would like it critiqued on the blog? Sadly, the photographs are hard to read when uploaded.
Thanks everyone and keep the work coming in!
Mr.Burns I have a question on todays Skellig. Can I make it a sad ending
Entirely up to you Amy.
. I forgot the full stop.
House point to Catherine for sending in her Skellig story for critique!
Catherine for the story, I think you could add a few more adverbs.
House point to Adam for beginning the constructive criticism!
All I can say is that I think she did a really good job.
Jake you need a capital letter for your name.